Poetry has many coats and yours wears a different and unique one. I always tell people to find their path and appreciate it. This is a good piece, although there were some, I found it hard to follow through but I am sure the same ones others may find it easy because poetry is subjected to the readers interpretation. All I will say is kudos on a good job done, write more and expand your muse and inspiration. You will grow as time goes on. -JO NKETIAH